The link is:
I can tell you put a lot of effort into your playing, but i.m.o. that solo just didn't match to the song. It (the song) is a slow piece calling for a little more feeling in your playing. Try slowing your solo down a little and playing less. Less is often times more.
wasn't this posted somewhere else as well...? I was sure I commented on the same video about 15 minutes ago...