Me again with my random scribblings

I haven't got a title for this piece yet, But I know I want to make one big conceptual song under the name of my other piece 'A year Of Endless Rain'. Im planning to split them up into movements, It makes it easier anyway. So consider the first piece Movement I. and this Movement II.


the continuous rain,
continually relentless,
as the ground erodes
under mirky water

Continuous desperation,
Conitunually overcomes,
any thought I previously had
with thoughts of escape

Escape from this nightmare
of melancholic* solitude
When Dreams Pass Reality
Theres no hope for humanity

* I'm not sure about the word melancholic. If anyone has any ideas for other words, I'd be super greatfull. Thanks, Ultrasonic