#1
I'm not mentally deranged
I just feel more enstranged
By these things you say
It's not OK

Got some ideas in mind
I hope that you see to find
The reality what's truly me
Now can you see

All the shit you do
What I've been put trough
Why can't you see
I don't need your solidarity

**** it all I dont want your empathy
You are sickening me
**** it all I dont want your sympathy
I am not in misery

You just seem to be absurd
Do you think these lies still hurt
Do you think that I'll be crawling on my knees

Stop know, 'cause there is no cure
I don't feel insecure
But you think that's me
I want you to see

I tolerate your shit
I will take the hit
But I dont want to see
You reaching out to me

**** it all I dont want your empathy
You are sickening me
**** it all I dont want your sympathy
I am not in misery
**** it all I dont need your empathy
You are not connected to me
**** it all and **** your sympathy
Are you ****ing kidding me

This shit I will break it down
I will break it down tonight

This shit I will break it down
I will break it down
I WILL BREAK IT DOWN !

**** it all I dont want your empathy
You are sickening me
**** it all I dont want your sympathy
I am not in misery
**** it all I dont need your empathy
You are not connected to me
**** it all and **** your sympathy
Are you ****ing kidding me

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Alright please give your opinions.
#2
Man... this is just expletive after expletive which I don't really think makes for good lyrics. The verses are generally good though and the degree of anger and non-feeling you're trying to portray gets through. But the meaning in the chorus is just sort of lost in the mixture of expletives.. I'd think about changing that.

Later man!
#3
Quote by aidzo_og
Man... this is just expletive after expletive which I don't really think makes for good lyrics. The verses are generally good though and the degree of anger and non-feeling you're trying to portray gets through. But the meaning in the chorus is just sort of lost in the mixture of expletives.. I'd think about changing that.

Later man!

Yeah man I see what you mean, I actually already thought of changing the second part of the chorus to show the true meaning of the song a bit more.

Thanks for your response, it's appreciated !