#1
Just got these recorded today using Reaper, an 8 year old rubbish PC and a mic for guitar hero, so not great quality lol.

They both have 2 guitar tracks played by me, a drum track and a bass track written by me and created using guitarpro 5.2. There no vocals as i can't sing and as such aint wrote any lyrics.

Crit4crit

Song 1

Song 2

cheers guys nd gals
#2
Metal has a quite nice progression, but maybe this song is too long and a bit repetitive.
Same for the second song.
#3
Quote by Silverpack
Metal has a quite nice progression, but maybe this song is too long and a bit repetitive.
Same for the second song.


thanks for listening to them, they are a bit long but that wasn't really planned it was just the way they turned out when i finished putting them together, but im going to have a look at them again once i've had a few more responses to see what could be changed and what not

cheers again