Phrygian Dominant & Myxolydian - Acoustic Experiment in C#

So I got into some new scales today. To try them out, I played a little improvisation alternating between those two scales. I might make a more metal-ish song out of this. Some time. It's on my profile.
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Critiquing as I listen. I like the intro, reminds me of something Dream Theater would do. At about 40 seconds I like what you do, specifically reminds me of Home by Dream Theater. If you were to expand on this you could have a great song. My only criticism is that the soloing was a bit random, which comes with improv, I'd just try to figure out exactly what you wanna do with it, and tighten it up a bit.
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