#1
This is my first song so don't be to hard. (its not finished yet)
This is meant to be played on a acoustic guitar, but i can only record my electric guitar. Otherwise the quality is very bad.
What do you think of it?
And if you have some advice, feel free to give it^^

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A64XiNIeToQ
#2
To be honest, for being your first song, it isn't bad. It does get pretty boring after a while. Try to change it up a bit maybe add a riff that starts on F or something. Just keep messing with chords, you'll figure it out.
Let me know what you think of this?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1324312

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#3
Thank you, i tought it was a little boring after a while
I think the songs on you're profile are nice, way better than what i can do.
#4
Thanks. Keep at it man, you'll get there.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.