#1
First song I wrote. I hope it does not suck.

Eject


There's no place like home because any place would be better than this.
Wish I could see you but the thought of you makes me sick.
I thought that I loved you but I'm a liar just like you.
So come on darling tell me that you love me too.

We've defaulted our way, through this relationship.
You never cared for me, more than the nearest silhouette.
You say I'm wrong, you say it hurts.
You say I'm cruel, but I say I'm honest.

There's no place like home because any place would be better than this.
Wish I could see you but the thought of you makes me sick.
I thought that I loved you but I'm a liar just like you.
So come on darling tell me that you love me too.

Would you forgive me if I didn't love you?
Would you forget me if I didn't hurt you?
Would you care at all if I didn't care to find out?
#2
First song ? It most certainly does not suck

I thought the final stanza was perfect as well, a general summary of the poem so to speak, and wrapped it up nicely, yet leaving it open for though with the rhetorical questions

Keep writing, and dont stop

Take a look at one of mine ?

The one called 'Empire' In my sig

thanks