#1
This is just something i came up with in like an hour, and ive got some very personal meaning to these lyrics. The rythm and song structure ive got down kinda of, kinda need to work with my friend who plays guitar to figure out what would sound the best. Any ideas or criticism would be welcomed.

(slow tempo, acoustic intro)

Why
Why
Why
Why

Why can't you trust me
Why can't I be free
Why can't you trust me
Why o why o why can't i be me

(tempo increase, everything else kicks in)

Tempted me in with sirens song
With you i spent day and night too long
Never thought that we didnt belong
But i failed to see that i was wrong

All your little little little insecurities
All they are doing is destroying me
All your little little little insecurities
All they are doing is a killing me

Why do you think all I do is lie
Why do I always seem to make you cry
Why am I always looking to the sky
Yelling at the top, God why o why

(Some kind of Solo here)

Give me a little more room to breathe
Your demeanor seems to make me seethe
You try to drag me down into the sea
Wailing like some kind of dark banshee

All you ever do is throw a fit
All you ever are is a little bitch
i feel like ive fallen into a pit
And i cant seem to climb out of it

Why do you always have to make a scene
Why do you always have to make believe
Why do you always have to **** with me
Why cant you just let me be

All your little little little insecurities
All they are doing is destroying me
All your little little little insecurities
All they are doing is a killing me

(Outro-fade)


6/15/10 edit: cut some stanza, added others, changed order of some
Last edited by trebe at Jun 16, 2010,
#5
no its not to fast, slow intro, and then moderately faster