This is my first full guitar pro tabbed song.

I'm after any constructive feedback or changes you may have.
This is my first tab so be nice, please (:

What can be changed?
Does it have potential?
And it needs a drum line if you have any ideas for that (:

hmmm, This actually isnt too bad. Some parts of it feel pretty slow. i guess that will change when u put drums in. Just keep writing. thats my only advice.
also, possibly put some thought into arangment, some of this seem alittle thrown together.