#1
So this is my first thread here. This is something that I wrote a long time ago and I haven't really developed (wow that's a weird looking word) but I like a lot. Any crit would be appreciated and given back. Thanks.

The boy looks through the glass,
he stares right out my window.
The girl will look right past,
she remains a widow.
You all will gasp.
You're all estranged and weirdos.
The truth remains in past,
we don't want no mirrors.

The widow lies in the grass,
where she can finally sleep.
The spider bite's her only comfort,
it's her only need.
Quote by crazy8rgood

Oh, look at those naughty waffles and their banana's...

*fapfapfapfapfap*

(if this is against the rules, I'll take it down.)
#2
No love?
Quote by crazy8rgood

Oh, look at those naughty waffles and their banana's...

*fapfapfapfapfap*

(if this is against the rules, I'll take it down.)