Heya all again

After a lot of constructive criticism about the song labelled metal i have done another version of it that is slightly shorter and hopefully less repetative to all listening so please tell me which you think is best, i will do this by way of a poll.

Here are the links to the songs, please vote and if you have any criticism to give please do

Metal Version 1

Metal Version 2
My Guitars:
Epiphone Flying V
Westfield SG
Laney Lc15110 230 G Tube Combo 15W
Presonus Audiobox USB

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