#2
ok the song is ok but your singing really needs some work
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#3
What specifically would you say I need to improve in my singing? Vowels, tuning, pronunciation, projection?
#4
nice chord progression, songwriting and also vocal melody, tho you often arent right on pitch.. That would be the only thing that really has to be improved, other than that song, melody and, which is in my opinion the best part of the whole song, the lyrics are very nice.

Ive got a thread on the same page, 'Angel In The Cueue'. you might like it