A song I've written for my new band to play when we pull ourselves together. It's without lyrics at the moment.

Point Blank Range

Still a bit rough round the edges, in a week it'll be sorted.
why the drum sound likes its trying to catch up with your guitars? Think some more practice on the arrangement is called for

or checking your latencies. at the very giving the mix a listen before rendering if you can't get your device to record optimally.
guitars are waaaay too overbearing, drums need to come up more along with raising the bass just a tad whilst lowering those rhythms.

you tightened up a bit more into the meat of the song, though the intro was a tad less pleasant to listen too lol what device are you using btw?

but anyways you already mentioned it was a bit rough around the edges so, blah XD

A C4C would be appreciated https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22127372#post22127372