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Heyo

If you like the lyrics, you can listen to the songs recording on my profile page and crit it on here. Thanks


You left home, your world be left back
And notes variety to the desperate faces
You wanna find your own way home
That leads you in the end to better places

You know are the result of the evolution
It's a masterpiece ready for a revolution
Confidence sparkled in your eyes
For a short while

[Chorus]
I saw you as the Angel In The Queue
Sad that circles surround your eyes
A child for eternity
Without a mother singing lullabies
Girl being lost in the world
Playing the rock who never cries
You see, its a long way home

Independence seemed such a mythic world
But sounds unplausible now that you speak out
A broken hero breaks the fairytale
And changes the dreamer into a doubter

You know are the result of the evolution
It's a masterpiece ready for a revolution
Confidence sparkled in your eyes
For a short while

[Chorus]
I saw you as the Angel In The Queue
Sad that circles surround your eyes
A child for eternity
Without a mother singing lullabies
Girl being lost in the world
Playing the rock who never cries
You see, its a long way home

The red, fiery sun
Flickers through the trees
As you are
On the run
(2x)

[chorus]

You see it's a long way home (4x)

I'd love to read your comments and read your lyrics as well if you want me to.
And as I said, if you like it please listen and tell me what you think. G'day