#2
was your intention to give me chills? lol intro was very interesting I actually already started hearing a tune in my head 15s into it

But its sooo sloooow just to get to the goodies!!! but I still think it was handled tastefully XD
guitars had a good vibe to them when they entered, although they were still a bit underwhelming, they didn't really *pop for me, not sure how to put it...

That cymbal tires my ear a bit, I think I ended up hearing that the most out of the entire song (The cymbal at 5:20 for example...) to the point it was distracting, at the very least annoying

drums also feel a bit weak, no real power to them, although a bass being present would help of course.

All in all I think the writing is good, just the mix and eq doesn't do it much justice >_<
or who knows, maybe it was just myspaces player...


Would appreciate the C4C

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22127372#post22127372
#3
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was your intention to give me chills? lol intro was very interesting I actually already started hearing a tune in my head 15s into it

But its sooo sloooow just to get to the goodies!!! but I still think it was handled tastefully XD
guitars had a good vibe to them when they entered, although they were still a bit underwhelming, they didn't really *pop for me, not sure how to put it...

That cymbal tires my ear a bit, I think I ended up hearing that the most out of the entire song (The cymbal at 5:20 for example...) to the point it was distracting, at the very least annoying

drums also feel a bit weak, no real power to them, although a bass being present would help of course.

All in all I think the writing is good, just the mix and eq doesn't do it much justice >_<
or who knows, maybe it was just myspaces player...


Would appreciate the C4C

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22127372#post22127372


Whoa!
Intense feedback there, thanks!

Yeah, the drums were programmed...i think we'll redo them but i don't know how much more realistic they could sound.

Also, intro was with guitars as well.

Ima go hear yours now.
#4
The intro's really nice, I like the ambient scratching and guitar noises and stuff in the background. My only issue is that the drone seems to stop all of a sudden when the guitar takes over, which is a little strange.
The guitars sound really nice, they're well written and the parts flow very well. I like the tones you've used which create a really atmospheric sound.
The drums do seem to be lacking a little bit, perhaps you could download a plug in or something for more powerful or more realistic drums. I use Superior Drummer 2, which is pretty sweet.
I think the mix could do with a little work aswell to get a bit more power.
Get some bass in there, it'll give it a deeper and heavier sound =]
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#5
Badass, as what I'd usually expect from you haha. It sounds like Rosetta and Tool in a way. The fuzz tone is kind of strange, a bit like Winos envelope filterish sound but heavier. I'd add some reverb to the drums, it will enhance the atmosphere quite a bit. I'd also make it a little more varied, it gets kind of monotonous. Great song, like I said last time, this would be even more awesome professionally rec'd with a full band, I'd support you guys all the way. Come to america if you go pro!

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1326531