Hi, thanks for the crit!

That's you?! Sounds really nice, from what I can hear you are singing the high notes very clearly and effortlessly. Nice! I would suggest trying to perhaps to get a tiny bit more dynamics into the song, quieten things down a bit... and maybe 'burst' into the chorus. (done this well at 1.56 though, so maybe i'm wrong).
Good choice of song! Very nicely done... you should get bored more often!
thanks for the crit as well
as you could probably tell I haven't played around with the editing stuff on the recording software yet so I think I might get bored again sometime this week and try to tweak the volumes and stuff =) btw you should really post that "perfected" muse cover, really like that song