#2
Hi, thanks for the crit!

That's you?! Sounds really nice, from what I can hear you are singing the high notes very clearly and effortlessly. Nice! I would suggest trying to perhaps to get a tiny bit more dynamics into the song, quieten things down a bit... and maybe 'burst' into the chorus. (done this well at 1.56 though, so maybe i'm wrong).
Good choice of song! Very nicely done... you should get bored more often!
#3
thanks for the crit as well
as you could probably tell I haven't played around with the editing stuff on the recording software yet so I think I might get bored again sometime this week and try to tweak the volumes and stuff =) btw you should really post that "perfected" muse cover, really like that song