Dreamer's Condition

This is a rap reggae piece I'm working on. The flow might not make sense to you right now but once you hear it with music it works really well. Please tell me what you think! peace!

Some call it stubborness, I call it persistence
It's a life long revolution, musical resistance
Put my young foot forward, jump start this endeavor
Soaked up the sunny days, soaked in the rainy weather
Your eyes don't see this world as I do
They most likely never will
Living your life stacking up a tab
But you never pay the bill
transmission and submission to a dreamer's condition
I may have half a chance but I'm a hero on a mission(my band name is Half Chance Heroes )

React and adapt gotta keep this train on track
Sticks and stones may brake my bones but your words stab my back
Step into the zone, two tone and a microphone
Show is over now and your speaker's blown
........ that's all I've got for now. still need to finish this verse and do a chorus.
With an irresistible blend of reggae induced hip-hop and catchy pop-punk hooks, Half Chance Heroes captivates audiences with their unique sound and energetic stage show. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8bSU0u8uvM