#1
I will never be afraid
Because I have found myself again
I will hold my head up high
Because I hate being tight
Will I ever find the right person for me
Because I have had people be, so mean to me
Now its time to see what I can do


I might not have all the money in the world
I might not have all the expensive things
but I am happy just the way I am
*
you said that you care
I don't care anymore as
I have friends that look out for me
because*we hold the key, to respect
as nobody is perfect, not even me
*
I might not have all the money in the world
I might not have all the expensive things
but I am happy just the way I am
I don’t need people to put me down
As the only way for me is up
#2
Love the upbeat chorus. In the verses's you use lots of me's at the end of lines. In the first you could have :

Will I ever find the right person
When people can Be so mean

It probably ruins the way it flows and isn't very gd but I think it can be improved by taking some of them out by being a bit more vague.

But yeah despite my ramblings I like it.
#3
you could consider just taking the to me off of the 2nd one - be so mean on its won would be ok
maybe the final line could be
"as the only way is up for me - I know its a " for me" but it flows nicer
overall shows promise and agree with Pwallop liking it =)
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