The quality of the original recorded material isn't too bad.

The guitars sound a bit mushy, and what on earth happened to the drums? The levels are all over the place. Turn the vocals way down, turn the guitar down a bit, and bring in those drums.
Im not a fan of that genre of music, so Ill just comment on the recording quality. as is, thats pretty terrible, the levels are off and everything sounds far too muddy. i would find someone that is familiar with audio engineering and/or recording and get them to give you some pointers. i realize this is just a "home recording" but you should be able to do much better then that.

good luck

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i like yalls songs..if you send me the individual tracks of the songs i can try to mix it better for ya..ill be helping ya and yall be helping me cuz i need practice!