#1
Hey guys, I have a really simple little ditty I'd like your thoughts on. "The Day Mary Jane Flew Away" is in my profile . Thanks in advance, and of course I'll c4c.

Keep Rockin'!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/SchmifftyFive/

Oh, and the vocals are like that intentionally; I was experimenting
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#2
beautiful.
i would of had drums come in somewhere in the 45- 1:00 area.
and i like the vocal idea but in my opinion its a little too monotone-ish sometimes.

i'm going to listen to the rest of your songs.
Oh, you DO want a free demo?