#1
Hey guys

Literally just been working on this for the past 30 mins. let me know what you think. if anything needs changing. it gets a tat messy toward the end but im still figuring out how to separate the sounds.

C4C

Thanks
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#3
Up to now it's sounding pretty good man! I got nothing that bad to comment on, other than the fact that the drums, particularly the first 2 measures, and when the 5/8 section comes on with double pedal, really detract from the pulse instead of create the proper atmosphere; I think you really need to focus the drums better on accentuating the rhythm properly.

Other than that, nice stuff up to now, I wanna hear more!

If you want to C4C check out my Uber Folder in my sig and comment on one of the pieces!