#1
I lay in bed for hours
thinking of my life
what is has become, compared to what it could've been.
I stare at my wall
Because I don't know how to thrive
but that glimmer of hope
Is what keeps me alive

I’ve seen the world from an all new view.
I seem to blame it all on you
I never thought it would be like this
Although, this life I will not miss.


Bliss?!
I THINK NOT
Peace?!
IN YOUR DREAMS
Serenityyy
Is killing meeee.

As I wait
For the moment of truth
For my raging blow
Upon the likes of mankind
Within the minds of man
I plan, I plot, I find, I use
Until it's all over.


I’ve seen the world from an all new view.
I seem to blame it all on you
I never thought it would be like this
Although, this life I will not miss


Bliss?!
I THINK NOT
Peace?!
IN YOUR DREAMS
Serenityyy
Is killing meeee.

Ive waited all this time
Ive hear all the lies
Ive seen what could become
Although over it all
I see what I've become

Bliss?!
I THINK NOT
Peace?!
IN YOUR DREAMS
Serenityyy
Is killing meeee.

(I know I posted this in the techniques forum, but I wanted to officially post them)
Guitars
Dean DOF
Alvarez acoustic
Devlin... err... something or another.

Amp
Line 6 Spyder 2
#2
Its good, but its not very like metaphorical. I was having the same problem I was forcing it. Just like chill out listen to your favorite songs and let it flow out of you don't force it. I wrote a great song I believe just a bit ago after listening to sublime, rome, dirty heads and silversun pickups for hours. And it just kind of flowed out i didn't even have to think of it.

2/5 for this song. It just seems forced to me.