#1
Hey guys,
Finished working out this song the other night. It's a little rough with transitions and what not, but i think it came out pretty good. Comments and Criticism would be much appreciated. C4C.

-James
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New Song (needs Drums).gpx
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#2
What file type is that? Guitar Pro 5.2 won't open it.
You're = You are
Your = Belongs to you

There = Not here
Their = Belongs to them
They're = They are
Thx.

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#4
yea dude, forgot to mention that lol
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#5
bump for anyone with GP6!
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#6
Sounds pretty nice, I like the riffs you used.
I would make the solo a little more interesting though, it sounds kind of generic/bland.

But the main thing I would do is change the tone of the guitars, like EQ them differently, the distortion you used sounds very very trebley.

Btw its nice to see other people using GP6 haha.
#7
thanks man, much appreciated. I started recording it yesterday and definitely going to change the solo up.
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ESP LTD EC-1000
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#8
I think GP just has a really poor RSE program sometimes. This is one of them. I couldnt really tell how good your rhythm guitar sounded but the leads minus repetition too often was good. I suggest adding an alt verse and some minor changes to the chorus you think will be most important (typically your final chorus/outro chorus).

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#9
hey dude,

Cool tune - I like how it all flows together - some subtle differences here n there wouldnt go amiss but a great effort overall.

If you can get it onto GP5 somehow (without it going totally fooked up) I'd be more then happy to have a go at adding some drums to it.

Is there any particular feel you are/were intending to aim for??

Peace
#10
thanks for all the crit dudes, it is being taken and I'm making some changes!
Go check out UneasyHearts piece and give him feedback, his work is phenominal.
Equipment:
ESP LTD EC-1000
Agile 727 Interceptor Pro
Ibanez RG7321
Marshall 1960A Cab
Peavey 6505+
Rack stuff

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