#2

Someone call EMI!

When you saw me sleeping
thought I was dreaming
of you...


I didn't tell you
That the only dream
Is Valium for me
#3
Quote by Td_Nights

Someone call EMI!


In a good way or bad way? :P:

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#5
Quote by Wquennasar
Oh dear

So.. poppy, haha

I like it!

Thanks!

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#6
Reminded of Move Along by All American Rejects for some reason which i'm guessing you can take as a compliment since you were going for poppy as hell :P

I didn't like bar 34. I just found it odd.

I really liked the breakdown.

Write some catchy lyrics and you'll have a radio hit in no time :P
#7
Quote by 21Fretter
Reminded of Move Along by All American Rejects for some reason which i'm guessing you can take as a compliment since you were going for poppy as hell :P

I didn't like bar 34. I just found it odd.

I really liked the breakdown.

Write some catchy lyrics and you'll have a radio hit in no time :P

Thanks!

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#8
One comment.

You should try to keep the energy you build at 34, it was a nice change, but should have lasted into the chorus
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