#1
you hear din in this forest
you hear far away
you say someday
the roots of these trees will turn up the sidewalks
and churn the concrete into dust
swallow it
then one day
maybe once days have been forgotten
chugged back into the belly of a mountainous cloud
it will sparkle with our bones familiarly in the bottom of a star
and traverse dreams for years through lightyears
into the eyes of someone who will never, ever know
but might
imagine
radiantly
something like you and me
as we were
when we were just beginning
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#2
wow really liked this. moving imagery, especially "chugged back into the belly of a mountainous cloud" it's incredibly baroque and grandiose but when juxtaposed onto the rest of the peace it just feels right.

p.s anthems for a seventeen year old girl is totally one of the best songs on that album
#3
Very nice. Reminds me of something I wrote a while ago which I have probably misplaced.
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you know the music from zelda that plays when you open a chest? that played in my head reading that headline.
#4
thanks guys i appreciate it

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Very nice. Reminds me of something I wrote a while ago which I have probably misplaced.


writing seems to make a break and run sometimes. hope you find it if you want to.


and yeah that song is amazing
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#5
A-****ing-mazing. Fin.
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