#1
reality stands alone
sheltered in hell
eggshell heaven resides
shadowing the form
but eternity marches beyond
upon endless beaches of thought
extended thieveries, hot upon the heels of the just
but dust enslaves them all
bringing both wise & foolish beneath the same shade
great divides drawn between the apple and the weed
all nation dormant and under siege
a banner encompassing all, arrows upon polar opposite earth
so reality, erect and sentinel
weeps into the wind
the dust having forgotten us all
mere whispers of dusk
now with her mountains have been crushed
upon a palm of progression
and ground into the groundwork
flattened by a millennia of arch-supports
the boulder dredging the sea, eroding the shorelines
bringing the lips of the land back
to kiss with hunger, demanding equated shares
but each inunkshuk stone stacks upon their rows
standing against themselves
held in position by the wind
leaning before the breeze
that calls the currents back and forth once more
to bring the tides of all time about again
as reality stands alone
breaking whitecaps
but worn into atlantic atlantis cities
the site to behold
and yet
forgotten
before the place could ever be told.
#2
This is a great piece. My only complaint is "atlantic atlantis cities", it's definitely redundant.
#3
Quote by rd93
This is a great piece. My only complaint is "atlantic atlantis cities", it's definitely redundant.


many thanks- and I agree on the edit.