#2
nice man! this was realy good. great singing. i like youre voice. the whole vibe of this was great. good lyrics too. what guitar is that. i love the headstock. give yourself more credit. this is a good song. i mean that. drums sound good too. not overpowering. cetchy little ditty man. this would be a great coffee house song. good job.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=24495023#post24495023