Hey watch up guys, i was bored today and decided to write something

and i'd appreciate a little help (write something in it and post it here)
guitars in drop b : D

i suck in english
hope you guys understand!

somebody help me write a metal song : D
I suck at making songs, but the only little tiny thing I would do, and when a mean tiny its only for one measure, is at the 8th measure where the jazz electric cuts out, keep the note at the 3rd fret 4th string going at quarter notes just for that one measure.