Hey dude,

BEAUTIFUL song writing!! The only thing I recommend you work on is your production. If this track had a little more balance in the frequency, particularly in the lower end it'd sound absolutely professional.

Also, your guitar was ever so slightly out of tune. But otherwise, absolutely beautiful!
I like the songwriting because its used similarly in maybe four or five 90s hits that I love dearly almost as catchy as well. Your guitar is out of tune which is something that's kinda bothering but whatever the chorus is catchy great job!

Would you like to collab with me? Can I cover your song?

Crit mine?

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