#1
This is the first song I've actually finished in a long time. It's a jazzy drum & bass track based on a Bbm7/Dorian vamp, with occasional movement to Eb7 and Fm7. Yes, the intro is long, but that's because I meant for it to be a full-length dance track, and I'm too lazy to arrange a shorter "radio edit," so to speak.

But anyway, tell me what you think.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot the link. http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Holy+Katana/music/play854711
Last edited by Holy Katana at Jun 23, 2010,
#2
Listened to the whole thing. Really like the drums throughout the song. Bass is solid. This kind of music should be plain and simple, but I still feel like its missing some punch. Perhaps a little jazzy flute playing, some funky sounding guitar. All in all a good track though.

Have a listen to my latest song if you will!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1329008