Hi, here is the most complete of all my songs. Looking for crits.

Also looking for anyone who can write strings for the rest of the song, as I really wan't them in there but can't write them.
Violent Message.gp5
WHAT do you want?
First of all, you spelled want wrong, and Ill write the strings. Or a sample. Your choice.
P.S. Where would you want it to be at?
Last edited by YesterdaysToday at Jun 23, 2010,
So I did.

Thanks a lot for this. I would like it to be in all the clean parts, and maybe in the background in the chorus too.
WHAT do you want?