I've never been much for the chug sections with pinch harmonics. For some reason pinch harmonics just sound dumb to me unless placed in a perfect spot in the song. I actually quit a band because the guitarist kept writing sections like that and all of our songs were sounding the same. I have to say I like your lead lines the best. Like toward the end of the first song.

I have to agree that your second song is quite a bit better. I like that there aren't any of those chug chug sections with the pinch harmonics. I would work on your transitions, try and make them smoother. It seems a bit choppy when you go from one to another. There's some good stuff in there, just keep on practicing.