#2
My opinion:
Less of the dancing around, more of the actual playing.
I think there was too much distortion, so everything just sounded like fuzz.
Parts were a little messy, it sounded like there were some bad notes ringing out.
Overall though, keep playing, keep practicing, and hopefully we'll see more of you.

It should be noted I'm not a huge fan of the band though, so I don't know the song too well.
#4
Bahaha. I had a feeling that the dancing was too much.
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#5
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My opinion:
Less of the dancing around, more of the actual playing.
I think there was too much distortion, so everything just sounded like fuzz.
Parts were a little messy, it sounded like there were some bad notes ringing out.
Overall though, keep playing, keep practicing, and hopefully we'll see more of you.

It should be noted I'm not a huge fan of the band though, so I don't know the song too well.


This guy pretty much said what I think as well.


The dancing around comes after learning the song perfect.
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#6
It's played pretty decently overall, but the solo could definitely use some improvement, especially the raked/sweeped part (which it doesn't look like you even played right).

And like everyone's saying, there's a fine line between having good stage presence and being distracting from the music. Just try to find that line.
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#7
I'm not saying that we were perfect by any means. The ridiculous dancing was because byt the time we had recorded it, we had played it through 20+ times and we got bored with standing around. Anyway, thanks for all the feedback, guys.

We'll try again after some more practice. Thanks!
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#8
Not only did you play half of it wrong and have way too much distortion, I want to punch both of you in the face for your ******y antics while playing...
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#9
Wow... Can you say "douchebag"? Quite a prick, you are, huh?
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#10
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Not only did you play half of it wrong and have way too much distortion, I want to punch both of you in the face for your ******y antics while playing...


+1
How could this song take you 20+ times.... I could play this with my butthole better than you guys did
#11
Then do it and post it, prick.
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#12
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It's played pretty decently overall, but the solo could definitely use some improvement, especially the raked/sweeped part (which it doesn't look like you even played right).

And like everyone's saying, there's a fine line between having good stage presence and being distracting from the music. Just try to find that line.


+1

Keep working youll get it

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1334512
#13
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Wow... Can you say "douchebag"? Quite a prick, you are, huh?


Umm, more like can you say "honest"?
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#14
Honesty can be given politely... And not like a friggin' middle schooler.
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