Try to sing with a little more body and conviction. Your voice sounds nice but your singing is a little quivery and lacks some projection. Sing from your diaphragm not your throat!

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I agree with the users above. You have a good voice you just need to learn how to channel it. Really focus it and it'll sound great. Overall good job.
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Hmm sounds good, I like the tonality of your voice. Although, like everyone has said, really getting that emotion into your voice is key. Of course, naturally I have to comment on the mix/master, I'd really like to see you get some good gear going and see how things sound then, pretty solid stuff though man, good job