#1
Here is what I have so far, any crits would be greatly appreciated.
Thank You.
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Last edited by YesterdaysToday at Jun 24, 2010,
#2
That was very nice, do you intend to record it?

I'm only going to complaing about the bass.
The guitars are following steady patterns and that's not a bad thing, but it kind of made me expect the bass to have that "variation" element we see in songs such as Stabwound. Maybe that's just me, but I really think you could improve your song by making a jazzier polyrhythmic bass line; think Obscura.
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#3
I don't really get what your trying to say. Could you give me an example by changing part of my song or suggesting a song?

EDIT: I think Im getting something now.
Last edited by YesterdaysToday at Jun 24, 2010,
#4
Quote by YesterdaysToday
I don't really get what your trying to say. Could you give me an example by changing part of my song or suggesting a song?


Check the tab for Anticosmic Overload. Nothing too "showy" that would make you bass take the lead and steal the guitars' spot, but interesting enough for people to notice there is a bass player in your band.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/tabs/o/obscura/anticosmic_overload_guitar_pro.htm
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