#2
I'm confused...

Did you write this or did someone else? If you did, I wouldn't be sharing it like this...

Edit: Also, are we to assume standard tuning?
Last edited by crazysam23_Atax at Jun 24, 2010,
#4
I really didn't like it until the clean part. From the clean part till the end (with one exception) it was great. The section from bars 86-94 was really awkward and didn't sound good at all. The notes are alright, the rhythm just makes it sound bad.
#5
Well... this is awkward, considering I liked all of it. It's definately technical.

Of course, im into things like Behold... the Arctopus, which is atonal and arhythmical to the point of complete confusion.

Depending on what goal you have here you may have something going for you, but like the band mentioned above it becomes a mystery to everyone whether or not you know what you're actually doing.