#2
Wassup,

Firstly, I think you should learn those chords. Not are chords awesome, but you'll be able to get a feeling for the rhythm that the song and solo is supposed to be in.

It's interesting having multiple takes of the same solo in the same video, it's like a choose your own adventure thing :P What I can see from all of them is that your pinky is flying wayy off the fretboard, your bends aren't always right on the note, and is quite often out of time/sync with the recording you're playing with. Slow it down until you get the timing right.

On the bright side you're playing standing up, which is cool. And I can see that you've got a little bit of a bop going there so that's cool too. Maybe in the next video you can play to a backing track without the other guitar so it's easier to hear you.

Can you critique my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1330525
And no, Guitar Hero will not help. Even on expert. Really.
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#4
Quote by AlanHB
Wassup,

Firstly, I think you should learn those chords. Not are chords awesome, but you'll be able to get a feeling for the rhythm that the song and solo is supposed to be in.

It's interesting having multiple takes of the same solo in the same video, it's like a choose your own adventure thing :P What I can see from all of them is that your pinky is flying wayy off the fretboard, your bends aren't always right on the note, and is quite often out of time/sync with the recording you're playing with. Slow it down until you get the timing right.

On the bright side you're playing standing up, which is cool. And I can see that you've got a little bit of a bop going there so that's cool too. Maybe in the next video you can play to a backing track without the other guitar so it's easier to hear you.

Can you critique my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1330525


Thank you for the input. I've been playing for two years now, I can play the chords to the song but i still can't give that reggae sound if you know what i mean so it sounds wierd. do you know where i can get song backtracks that would be awesome. thansk and i commented on yur vid as well
Last edited by asb9pwns at Jun 26, 2010,
#5
Quote by ankthebank
I've left a comment on your vid, my username is 'songsaj'

Comment on mine? Thanks
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1329977
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1319237


thank you for the input,I commented on youtube. Good job btw they were good