#1
Liar, Liar, Soul's On Fire
(Not quite finished)


(Verse 1)
Fool me once shame on you
Fool me twice shame on me
Never knew that was my life's philosophy

Dancing around a ring of fire
One more burn
One more liar

(Chorus)
You think you're so good
Your soul is on fire
I see it in your eyes
You are a liar
You think you're so good
Your soul is on fire
Look me in the eyes
Call me a liar

No you can't
Yes you can; you're a liar

(Verse 2)
Smoking is bad
Alcohol is good
I'm so confused, it's like i'm in Hollywood

People's the same
The lies never change
Saints on the outside
Demons behind the eyes

(Repeat Chorus)
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!


#2
Seems quite... blunt, for the most part. There are a few good lines in there, I like the "Your soul is on fire" thing, maybe expand the saints and demons thing too cause that could be cool