#2
You can just attach GP5 you know.

Yeah it's good, but I don't think you should go back to the intro as soon as bar 17. The riff just before that should probably be built on, it sounds a bit rushed otherwise.
#3
that's sounding pretty sick. Just out in a melody of some kind and an ending, and done!
- Ibanez S470 (2004)
- late 70's vintage Fender Stratocaster (USA)
- VOX VT100 Amp
- Digitech Whammy Pedal
- Weeping Demon Wah Pedal
- Visual Sound Volume Pedal
- MXR Micro Amp
#4
Good work, dude.
The only thing that really bothered me was that repetitive 12-10-9 riff. Seems to me that you started out strong but then just ran out of ideas.