#1
Stand Up
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This came to me while working at my shitty ass job to try and pay for miscellaneous musical equipment, as I was pissed to hell about listening to people order me around who had the intelligible equivalent to that of a desk. It's really short right now, gonna add another verse probably.

VERSE 1

When all hope is gone
And everything is wrong
Get off your ass
Take one last hit of grass
Lose the restriction
Seek your liberation
Ignore what you’re told
You can’t do


CHORUS

Stand up

Make your proclamation
Fight back
Punch holes in the equation
Raise hell
Start an insurrection
Stand up
Tell them to

CHORUS OUTRO TO INTERLUDE

Go away
I’m not gonna stay
Stuck here with you

VERSE 2

You’re afraid of being
Stranded without feeling
There is no need
To fear you can’t succeed
In this world where
Nothing seems fair
Show them that you
Won’t back down

CHORUS

Stand up
Make your proclamation
Fight back
Punch holes in the equation
Raise hell
Start an insurrection
Stand up
Tell them to

CHORUS OUTRO TO INTERLUDE

Go away
I’m not gonna stay
Stuck here with you
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#2
Not bad! As a matter of fact, it's pretty darn good.
Keep working on it, refine it, feel it come alive in your head.

I like it.
jodyW
#3
Thanks man.

I'm more than likely going to do some fine tuning, and depending on how long the song is when we play it at out next practice, add a third verse.
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#5
Thank you

Once we get around to recording I'll link you guys for a listen if you want.
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#6
I like this a good bit, especially the chorus, I'd love to hear this when you're done recording it!
"Love everything. Know nothing."

"What do you mean 'do you even know how to play bongo drums?'?! Do I not have hands?! And pot?!"
#7
i dig it.
solid.

what kind of genre is this for?
not that you should lump it in with anything,
but i imagine in my head as a straight punk song.
i am the lamb.
point me to the slaughter.
#8
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I like this a good bit, especially the chorus, I'd love to hear this when you're done recording it!



No problem, and thank you

It's a real anthem type song, and real catchy, at least to me anyway. Right now my new band has 4 other songs besides this, once we've got maybe 3 more songs and have played enough gigs, we'll go in to the studio. So probably before the end of the summer, or at least I'm hoping.

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i dig it.
solid.

what kind of genre is this for?
not that you should lump it in with anything,
but i imagine in my head as a straight punk song.

It is for my punk band, so you're imagining it correctly.

But it isn't typical underground hardcore thrashy punk, there's an actual melody that you can wrap your ears around, so to speak. Not just non-stop power chord carnage.
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