#1
there's rot in the air
and death in the light
red splattered guilt
puts up a good fight

a fantastic tale
in the smears and the pools
of the search for never
by a beautiful fool

there's a hole in tonight
just the right size
to let loose thousands
of bloodthirsty flies

i'd tell you the truth
but it's too late now
it was all my fault
and you'll never know how


So, I thought up the line "why did you feed the flies," and started working with it to get something I think is worth sharing. This is the result, even though it lacks that line that started me off. Criticism, negative or otherwise, is much appreciated.