#2
You some nice things going on with the rhythm guitar, but I would have gone for a warmer, fuller tone. I wasn't really a fan of you lead work, as it really didn't seem to flow or go with the song to me. I'd go back to developing the rhythm guitar and work from the ground up.

Cheers!
#3
Quote by mccabe24
You some nice things going on with the rhythm guitar, but I would have gone for a warmer, fuller tone. I wasn't really a fan of you lead work, as it really didn't seem to flow or go with the song to me. I'd go back to developing the rhythm guitar and work from the ground up.

Cheers!

thanks for the constructive crit dude

but explain the thing of the warmer, fuller tone better if you can, ty
#5
Quote by mccabe24
By warmer I mean, many of your notes sound harsh (too much treble). Instead of describing with words what I mean by warm, I'll give you an example. Think the guitar you hear Slash play in Knockin on Heaven's Door. A tone like that would go great with this song.

oh, ok great description

ty