#1
Before you go ahead and read it, just making this clear: It has kind of a dark softness to it. If you've ever listened to Opeth or Ghost Brigade, that's basically what it's like. Instead of swinging back and forth with the rhymes it just comes out slowly, like a long exhale. Also, I'm probably gonna add another verse to it, but I wanted to get some criticism on it first.


I can see me bones,
underneath my flesh.
I'm imprisoned in this body,
my soul is such a mess...

I see a dark abyss
when I close my eyes.
No sadness, no mourning,
no pain and no lies...

Just silence and time
even the gods can not tell.
Living this life alone;
it's like burning in Hell.

Darkness...with shadows...
Souls...still shackled...
Life has no meaning
but Love keeps me breathing.

Fire! Destruction! Lust and Seduction!
Pitiful mortals who only accept deduction...
Passion...and kindness...I can see it in your eyes...
There is only one thing we need in this life: Love

Many will say that I'm wasting my time,
but I don't give a f*** because this is my life.
And many will say that I've lost my mind,
But I don't give a f*** because now is my time.

Fire! Destruction! Lust and Seduction!
Pitiful mortals who only accept deductions.
Torment! And Screaming! I can see it in your eyes...
There is only one thing we feel in this life: Hate

So tonight I'll stay awake,
because there's no way I can sleep.
These thoughts...always racing through my head.
Every day I wonder if I'd be better off dead...

Darkness...with shadows...
Souls...still shackled...
Life has no meaning...
But Love keeps me breathing.