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This is my second song. No mean, hurtful comments. Just let me know if it was good. bad, okay. And let me know how I can do better in the future.

Thanks.


You are the most beautiful thing to ever set foot on this earth.
Your more beautiful than the "Garden of Eden!"
you were like the sun, the wind, the earth, where did it all go?
You stuck a knife and stabbed me in a place I call my "heart."
I don't know if the connection will forever last!
Where did it all go?


When I saw you for the first time,
I thought we had something but I was sadly mistaken. (I was sadly mistaken!)
I loved the way you talked, the way you walked,
all I wanted was to hold you in my arms.

You hurt me, ignored me, upset me.
You got the better half of this mess
our love was like a battlefield but you were the commander
and I was swabbing the deck.

When I saw you for the first time,I
thought we had something but I was sadly mistaken. (I was sadly mistaken!)
I loved the way you talked, the way you walked,
all I wanted was to hold you in my arms.

You are the most beautiful thing to ever set foot on this earth.
Your more beautiful than the "Garden of Eden!"
you were like the sun, the wind, the earth, where did it all go?
You stuck a knife and stabbed me in a place I call my "heart."
I don't know if the connection will forever last!
Where did it all go?