I'm not sure If i like it or if it is very original. There's not much exciting or interesting. But I am proud. It IS my first time.Let me know what you think, and tell me what I can do to improve it. It is in an attached file. I also attatched a MIDI so you can hear it.
Epiphone SG Special
Peavy Vypyr amp

Been Playing Every day since July 30th, 2009.
No lessons, only the ones provided here at Ultimate Guitar.
Last edited by JakeIsInsane at Jun 27, 2010,
interesting dood.
GP woo.
Quite cool buddy.
On playing the Paul Gilbert signature at the guitar store extensively, my missus sighed:
"Put it down now, It's like you love that guitar more than me!"
In Which I replied.
"Well it has got two F-Holes!"
It's definitely a start with potential. I think the open chord at the start is little too generic.

Keep expanding on this, I like what you have so far.
Spiral Out
nice riff man im just getting into metalcore this is definatly cool