#1
Re-posting this from a few weeks ago, but made some changes... Changed a line in first verse, and I had also said on the original thread that I was gonna change the bridge, and I did, though I still am not really satisfied with it, or with the first verse still, so if anyone has any advice on how I can tweak what I've changed a bit, or if I even need to, that would be great. Just keep in mind that I'm trying to make sure the bridge does a lot to separate the first verse/chorus and the second one, as they are meant to represent changing viewpoints on certain things, each verse/chorus section representing a different viewpoint. Though then again they can represent whatever the reader wants, who am I to say what it's supposed to mean :p? But ANYWHO, enough of my rambling, here's the song...


Verse 1:

I don't know where I am or where I'm going
Chasing the light of the moon
I don't know where I am or where I'm going
If I did, I'd stay with you


Chorus:

I tripped into myself, now I need a little help
I can hold my own, but now it's starting to show
That I'm having some difficulty
Though don't mind me, it ain't easy
But nothing of worth ever is, it never is


Bridge:

No more being chained in place
No more lies stained on my face
I'm gonna leave it all up to fate
I'm gonna leave without a trace
And I'm never, no I'm never, never coming back

(Insert Harmonica Solo :p)


Verse:

I don't know where I am or where I'm going
Just trying to find something new
I don't know where I am or where I'm going
But you know it won't be with you


Chorus:

I tripped into myself, but I don't need any help
I can hold my own, not that I'd let it show
If I was having some difficulty
So don't mind me, it ain't easy
But nothing in life ever is, it never is


Outro:

(It never ends
It never ends
It never ends
But why would you want it to?) X2
"Love everything. Know nothing."

"What do you mean 'do you even know how to play bongo drums?'?! Do I not have hands?! And pot?!"
Last edited by TheJake1 at Jun 27, 2010,
#2
"I tripped into myself, but I don't need any help
I can hold my own, not that I'd let it show
If I was having some difficulty
So don't mind me, it ain't easy
But nothing in life ever is, it never is"

/choice cut.

not my cup o tea.
but its good.
and devoid of "filler",
which makes it even better.
i am the lamb.
point me to the slaughter.