#1
This is my song "A light to someone's Dark." I'm in a band called sworn red, though it's just me on all the instruments. This was recorded in my home studio and I just wanna know what people think. There's a player on my bands website (Assuming I'm allowed to link to it, if not I'll upload to my profile) And that's at http://www.swornred.tk It's the top song, a litght to someone's dark As Always, I'll crit you if you crit me
#2
Meh,
need to make the intro a little more "professional" sounding.
guitar sound is a little thin.
where is the bass?
drums lack...drumming.

singing is actually pretty well done though.
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