#1
I just uploaded one of my songs with drums. It's called Waves of Despair with drums, and it's on my profile. C4C as usual, leave a link and I'll crit you back ASAP.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#2
Hi,
it's an awesome song !
the intro is nice with the guitars, very sweet ! The drums sounds a bit repetitive I think, but only in the beginning. I really like the guitar riffs, it's very nice. The tone is good for this song, it suits good.
All in all your song is awesome, I like it a lot. Very good job !

C4C ? It's just some ideas for a song : https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1329383
#3
Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#4
So yea, your sig became my latest facebook update.

Love the song.. Fast paced heavy, great sounding drums - High!! quality sounds. Love the song. I just wish the guitars were a little more up front (its my favorite part of songs) other than that the song is spot on metal and really fun.


The first one is an unfinished metalish song and the second one is just some fun with something that i came up with while watching TV.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1331822

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332054
#5
The main melody, at 0:53 that repeats other times, is so catchy. It's very memorable, and it resolves itself perfectly. The whole song is excellent, but that part really stands out to me. I like the way you write and play, I think your work has a ton of potential, and it will only get better.
#7
RisingForce,
It would be good if you could delete the first 2 seconds of the recording. If your recording set up could do some sort of scrubbing, you could start the audio just milliseconds before the good playing starts. The song 'Waves of Despair' itself is actually quite good. Sound quality is OK, but it could definitely be better. Most of your playing is good, some of it could be tighter. Keep at it & you'll keep getting better at playing & recording. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332089