I wrote this song yesterday, and decided i liked it enough to keep going with it. Please let me know what you think, and what i can work on.

Also, I have no idea where to start with lyrics and vocals. I can come up with some pretty good lyrics, but i dont know how to create a vocal pattern very well. Any tips you could give me in this department would be awesome.

Thanks a lot.
Last edited by ¤TabMaster¤ at Jul 1, 2010,
vi IV V IV... it has served us well.
Marshall amplifiers are the truest purveyors of rock and roll known to man.

"And give a man an amplifier and a synthesizer, and he doesn't become whoever, you know. He doesn't become us."

Holy crap, check this out!
id say be risky... do something no one would do, when i write lyrics and melodies i try to do a pattern that flows but its unexpected hope to hear a full version soon....

check out my band song on my profile or on this thread...
Thanks for the tips and the kind words guys. I'll give it a try today and see what i can come up with.

Serial_177 - I really like your song. And the quality you recorded it in sounds flawless. Nice work
I just added some lyrics This is NOT ME SINGING. This is my friend Caleb. I wrote the lyrics except for the chorus. Let me know what you think
I like the melody, for your first recording the guitar sounds pretty good

I couldn't really make out the lyrics, they were a bit fuzzy

good work