heres a little riff i put together with some drums and what not i was wondering what you guys think so far if it sounds like a solid enough start or if i should ditch the song all together
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dude that sounds sick
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i think it sounds solid as it is, just keep going with the interesting jazzy chords.
I really like it, its like Lamb of God only good.
I think it sounds pretty good. Sure, it sounds like most of the metal written on this forum, but it's a mighty good start mate.

Bar 15 does sound off, on the open notes, and that should be adjusted.

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